My song

Started by White Fang on 24 Feb 2005, 21:08 UTC · 14 preserved posts

87-106942202724 Feb 2005, 21:08 UTC

Hey everybody, here's a song I wrote, what do you think about it?

"Impossible"

If there's something I need to say
I would say it in any way
Because I always speak my mind
I always knew that when in love
You have to take what may come
Or else it's worth nothing at all
And to be a little more honest
No one ever really cared about me

[Chorus1]
I'm sick and tired of the news on TV
And everyday things just get more stupid
I wish that I could change the world
But I know that I can't, it's impossible

When you ask for my oponion
I sometimes won't give it
'Cause I might get in to trouble
Why am I so sad and alone?
When I sit here in my home
That's just something called depression
You can say I have it all
But there's still a void

[Chorus2]
I'm sick and tired of my daily routine
How can I be happy when I have nothing
I wish that I could change the world
But I know that I can't, it's impossible

I always knew that someday
I would tell you things my way
But I didn't mean to hurt you
With the things that I do
Just to let you know, oh
I can be nice and bad as well

[Chorus3]
Why do you always make this so #### hard?
And everyday that goes by it only gets worse
Sometimes I wish I could change the world
But I know I can't, it's impossible

© Wolf64 Entertainment 2005

70-110747806824 Feb 2005, 23:56 UTC

cool. I like it.

115-110950221427 Feb 2005, 16:59 UTC

Nice, better than some music launched this year.

87-106942202701 Mar 2005, 15:57 UTC

Thank you

87-110773702001 Mar 2005, 16:19 UTC

I really like the lyrics, but what beat does it go to?

Wolfen

87-106942202707 Mar 2005, 21:15 UTC

Starts out acoustic and then the drums start and then during the chorus it becomes rock, not hard rock, but just rock and it's got kinda of a "I had enough of this sh*t" feeling it.

78-110711749709 Mar 2005, 03:18 UTC

Very nice. Got real attitude, and that's good thing! Love the fact that you put in an acoustic (I play one myself) and I would love to hear it recorded. I sometimes like rock, too, but not hard rock, so hey, this all sounds great to me.

87-106942202711 Mar 2005, 15:46 UTC

If you liked that song, here's another one of my personal favorites. It's called "Better Off Without You", I wrote it late at night and it has that rock/pop sound that is so popular nowadays. So here it is, enjoy

"Better Off Without You"

I never thought that you
Would be so bad for me after all this time
I've always had in mind
Bad memories that would break me down
But now I know that I'm happier
Because I don't have you

[Chorus]
I'm looking towards a new day
There'll always be things that I'll regret
There's nothing left to say
Other than that I'm better off without you

I've always tried to be good
But why can't you appreciate that
Every time that I wasn't looking
You would always stab me in the back
It'll take time until I get better
But I know it won't be any longer

[Chorus]

Somewhere in the back of my mind
There will be things that I can't hide
Like my feeling of sadness
And the pain used to be in my heart

[Chorus] 2x

© Wolf64 Entertainment 2005

78-110711749711 Mar 2005, 23:00 UTC

Wow, yet another great job, White Fang! So, do you have a band or something?

70-110747806811 Mar 2005, 23:07 UTC

wow I like the second song better than the first one! Love the sttitude of both the songs. very good.

87-106942202712 Mar 2005, 16:24 UTC

Thank you people for liking my songs, and no I don't have a band yet, but I plan to form one and call it Wolfpack...the band proyect is on hold for now until further notice. So for now I'm solo

115-110950221412 Mar 2005, 17:23 UTC

Good luck in your music career!

87-106942202722 Mar 2005, 20:32 UTC

Hey, do you guys want another one of my songs? Whether you want it or not, here it is, and it's called "Freedom"

"Freedom"

I'm the only one who knows who I am
And that's why I'll always be misunderstood
I'm the only one who knows what I want
And that's why freedom belongs to me

I don't believe in love or compromises
They're only promises waiting to be broken
I don't believe in politics or corruption
They're only things that repress us all
I only believe in the things that I trust
And in what my friends believe in

[Chorus]
I'm the only one who knows who I am
And that's why I'll always be misunderstood
I'm the only one who knows what I want
And that's why freedom belongs to me
Maybe I talk to much, but I don't care at all
'Cause I choose the way I wanna live my life

I don't believe in racism or silence
That's makes the world fall apart
I don't believe in lust or violence
You have to follow your heart
I only believe in the little things that we ignore
And I'm sorry if I'm being to open

[Chorus]

When you ask me what I'm thinking
I'll tell you, 'cause I can't keep my mouth shut
I just wanna live my own life
Call me a redneck, a hippie, a punk or whatever
I don't care!

[Chorus] 2x

And here's the album cover I made for my collection of songs I wrote (but don't expect to see it in stores, it's just an online thing I wanted to do)
http://www.freewebs.com/roverstorage/albumfront2.jpg

And this is the back part
http://www.freewebs.com/roverstorage/albumback.jpg

78-110711749722 Mar 2005, 20:46 UTC

Wow- you really have a talent for this sort of thing. I hope you can get that band together. Good luck!