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Poem: a lonely wolf

Poem

Started by Talia White Wolf on 03 Mar 2005, 03:12 UTC · 9 preserved posts

A Lonely Wolf:

A lonely wolf stands at the top of the snow capped mountains,
Staring down at the world below.
She sits down and howls at the moon,
Wanting her love to come back soon.
She stares at the stars above and wants someone to love.
She is all alone and has no body to talk to, she wonders why,
Why does everyone neglect her?
Is it because she is old or is it because she is a spirit?
Whatever it is, she will never know�

An original poem written by: Talia White Wolf
Nice pome. It made Me think of Aniu
That's really good. I love the slightly broken rythym to it- it seems to move well with the subject. :D
ooh very good. Good job, Talia White Wolf :D
thanks to everyone for all of their possitive feedback, your feedback is always a welcome sight!
Well, don't worry- you keep writing and we'll keep it coming! I've very much enjoyed all your pieces so far.
thanks Nashoba
Yes I've enjoyed them alot too:D
nice but is too short