Part 1 ofmy story...
84-110980270704 Mar 2005, 01:58 UTC
Talia�s story: part 1
Talia was a white wolf, who was separated from her parents at a young age, when they were killed by hunters, leaving Ental the leader of the Grey Wolf Clan to look after her and teach her about life.
One day when she was walking through the territory, she met Tarkel, a young black and silver wolf from the Silver Wolf Clan. They started talking and soon they fell in love, but because the Grey Wolf Clan and the Silver Wolf Clan were both rivals they had to have a secret love relationship.
A couple of weeks later, the Grey Wolf Clan and the Silver Wolf Clan were going to war, but because Talia and Tarkel were both in love with each other they both begged their fathers, who also happened to be their Clan�s leaders, to not to go to war but to make a friendship with the other Clan. But both fathers/leaders declined and they went to war, but because Talia was a girl she couldn�t go to war, and because Tarkel loved Talia so much, he pretended to be sick so that he didn�t have to go.
Later on after the 3 month war, Talia�s and Tarkel�s fathers both asked them why they wanted to make a friendship with the other Clan, Tarkel was strong and didn�t tell his father about his secret relationship with Talia, but Talia did, and then her father got so angry, that he called an emergency meeting for all of the elders, and they all agreed that she should either chose from Exile or Death for High Treason. And because she loved Tarkel so much, she chose exile from the Clan. She went in search for another Clan and decided that she might try and join Tarkel�s Clan�
To Be Continued�
(more to come)
70-110747806804 Mar 2005, 02:30 UTC
wow thats pretty good so far.
84-110980270704 Mar 2005, 03:18 UTC
thanks Funkee_Puppee! that is one reason why i love it here on this forum site, everyone is so positive and nice towards each other. its great!!
84-110980270704 Mar 2005, 03:36 UTC
Part 2 of Talia's story:
Previously in part one:
Talia and Tarkel meet and fall in love with each other, their two Clans go to war with each other and Talia gets exiled for High Treason and goes in search of a new Clan.
Talia�s story: part 2
Talia was wondering around the wilderness hoping to meet Tarkel or someone else from the Silver Wolf Clan, for she did not know where they are. All of a sudden a rabbit came bolting out of the bushes and after it was Tarkel.
�Tarkel!� Talia screamed as she saw him run past her. Tarkel soon stopped chasing the rabbit, turned around and started walking towards Talia.
�Talia� What are you doing here? Shouldn�t you be with your Clan?� Tarkel asked in surprise.
�I gave into my father and told him about us, and I was exiled, and now I don�t have anywhere to live.�
�Your old Clan doesn�t have any friendly Clans or anything?�
�No, my father hated anyone who wasn�t in the clan.�
�Oh I see��
�Well actually I was wondering if maybe I could become a member of your Clan, then we won�t have to have a secret relationship. Would it be possible?�
�I don�t know, I�ll have to ask my father and he�ll have to meet you.�
�I�m ok with that.�
So Talia and Tarkel went to Tarkel�s Clan�s spot, but only Tarkel went I, because he told Talia to stay outside where it is safer. A few hours later, Tarkel and his father Elmsong came out and Elmsong talked with Talia.
�Tarkel tells me that your father Ental has exiled you for High Treason, is this right?�
�Yes, my lord it is.�
�What was your Treason?�
�It was falling in love and spending time with your son Tarkel�
�And yet he exiled you for that?�
�He and the other elders of the Grey Wolf Clan hates anyone who isn�t in the Clan. They believe in punishment for even the smallest of things such as, biting another wolf on his or her tail.�
�I see, and what makes you sure you would be good in this clan?�
�I know the plans that my �father� has made for future wars and future domination, and I do not want to be apart from your son Tarkel.�
�I see, well you have convinced me, even though I do not wish to fight another war with your father�s Clan. But I am afraid it is not as simple, we will have to wait until the end of tonight�s Elders meeting to see if you will be allowed to join our Clan.�
�I can wait, my lord�
�Good�
To be continued in part 3
70-110747806804 Mar 2005, 04:39 UTC
you're welcome:D
87-110773702009 Mar 2005, 20:10 UTC
Wow!!!!!!! Really nice story! I think you have potential, in my point of view that is. Please keep writing more. 
84-110980270709 Mar 2005, 22:25 UTC
Part 3 (last and final part)
Soon later, Elmsong came out of the camp and had told Talia that he and the other elders of the pack, agreed that she can live with them, and not only because they were nice wolves and that they wanted to know the plans that Talia's ex-father had in store, it was also because her and Tarkel's undenying and undying love for each other.
Soon after a few months slowly crept past and winter soon turned into spring, Talia told Elmsong her new father and father in law, that her ex-father was planning an attack on their neighbouring packs, and beause Elmsong and his Clan were all friends with the other packs that he and the other elders of the Clan all decided that they should have a Clan meeting to decide who will be their spokes-wolf to go and warn the other Clans.
Soon after the meeting began, everyone had agreed that because it was Talia who told them about her ex-father's plans to attack, that she should go and warn the others. They also decided that because the road is unsafe, that Tarkel should go with her to be her protector.
So soon afterwards, Talia and Tarkel soon set off to warn the other clans, and because it was comming from Talia's mouth they all believed her and because that Talia's and Tarkel's clan were friends with these clans and they had plenty of space and food and water for the other clans, they invited them to stay at their spot.
Soon, when al lthe other Clans were there, they all had a meeting ,for it was the next day that Talia's ex-father was going to attack the other clans. Talia thought it would be a good idea for her and Tarkel to come (Tarkel will be hiding ofcourse) and so that Talia could pretend to be on her ex-father's Clan side still and head them off in the wrong direction, so that Elmsong and the other elders can go into their clan's area and take all the food and water from her ex-father's clan.
But just as they were about to leave, Talia came running back crying with Tarkel soon bolting after her. Elmsong looked suprised and worried, so he asked Talia why she was crying.
"I wen't to tell my ex-father, but when I got there their bodies were scattered all over the place, it looks like the Bear or Wolvering clan had attacked them, my brothers and sisters... all dead!"
"Oh my... Talia I'm so sorry"
"I hated my father, but I loved my brothers and sisters just like I love Tarkel, because they always looked after me and were always on my side when father got angry at me."
"I'm truly sorry Talia, I..."
"It's not your fault, father had it comming but not my brothers and sisters"
"It's not likely for the Bear or Wolvering clan to attack a Wolf Clan, the only time they do attack a Wolf clan is when they have lost all their food and water"
"Please, i know its uunlike you, but we must attack the Bear and Wolvering clan for my brothers and sisters... please!"
"I would like to, but it's not all up to me, I will have to talk to the other elders and see what they think."
Soon afterwards, Elmsong came out from the meeting and told Talia that they will attack the Bear and Wolvering clan. But then an Elder of one of the other Wolf Clan came and asked,
"But Talia, how do you know that it was the Bear and Wolvering clans who attacked your father's clan?"
"Because of the markings they left, when i was still living with them, my father told me about the markings of all the different clans, and they were combined..."
The next day, Tarkel and all the young males of all the other Clans and Tarkel's Clan ofcourse, all went out to attack the Bear and Wolvering Clans, but when they got there, all of the Bears and Wolverings were dead, their bodies scattered all over the place. It had seemed that because of their starvation, they had attacked each other for their food and in the end managed to kill each other.
Tarkel and all the other wolves went back to their clan and told Elmsong and the other Elders about what they saw.
"It is a pitty that the other clans had to die that way, but i must say it is a bit of a relief that they are gone, The bears were ok, they rarely ever attacked anothe clan, but the wolverins were bothersome, they always attacked another clan on site."
"Yes, it is a pitty, The Elders of the bear clan had always helped me out in time of trouble and were always there for me."
the End!
writers note; this is the end of Talia's story, but I gurauntee that there will be more writings by me in the not so near future!
84-110980270709 Mar 2005, 22:27 UTC
thanks to everyone here for their support and possitive feedback, your feedback is always welcome!!
109-110769783828 Mar 2005, 18:26 UTC
very nice!!!!!