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A poem by talia white wolf

Started by Talia White Wolf on 05 Mar 2005, 11:20 UTC · 8 preserved posts

Poem:

We all howl at the moon, but I wonder why
why must we all stand here and weep?
my love is lost and my hate began,
the hunters took my love away, and killed my children.
I wonder why i must stay, stay untill i wither away.
Today is my final day, the day that I will finaly join my family in the heavens above.
Although my body is gone, my spirit will remain, for you still need my guidance, you need to know that I care and that I will always be there for you.
My spirit may be in the form of a black raven, or even a white dove, what happens to me in the afterlife is up to the great spirits in the skies above.
I need you to know that I am here, even though I am dead and gone, that I am here.
No storm, no hail, no snow, now others can stop my spirit from being with you....

Note: this poem was written by Talia White Wolf, this poem somewhat reflects some of her feelings.
Your poem is very intersting goes deep to the heart altrough it doesnt rime in some areas (probably because your from Australia) in today's poetry rime isnt so important.
 A word from writer to writer, i myself write menalcolic poems but im trying to get more lifely poems.
 A man's power is not in his fists
 But in the mind and heart he keeps.
Wow very good Talia white wolf. You're a very good writer.:D
Very Nice Pome
Wow. That was wonderful. And I agree, rhyme isn't important, it's the words and- most importantly- the emotions portrayed and how strongly they come across that counts. Beautiful. Please keep writing.
thanks to everyone for their support and possitive feedback! :D
your welcome Talia White Wolf :D
nice poem!!!!