82-111069430113 Mar 2005, 06:48 UTC
Angry Wolf: (song)
Verse One:
Hunter came and took my love away,
and now I have to lead, lead the pack away!
Hunter came and killed my children,
and now I have only one motion, and that is to kill him!
Chorus:
I must kill the hunter,
kill him, for I am an angry wolf!
I must hunt the hunter down,
and now the hunter is the hunted.
I must kill the hunter,
Kill him, for I am an angry wolf!
Verse Two:
Hunter set a trap for me,
he poisoned some food and thought I'd take the bait!
Hunter came and saw me,
he tried to shoot me, but I just stood there and he took my bait!
Chorus
Verse Three:
Hunter never gives up,
The hunter's time is almost up!
At the dawn of night,
I will lead the pack and then kill him,
The hunter has become our prey!
Chorus
115-110950221413 Mar 2005, 13:17 UTC
Cool poetry, very heartbreaking, keep it up, u are doing fine!
P.S. Here hunter here boy, come on down be scared i wont hurt you (at least not yet), what a cute little hunter take a cute little mithril sword in the face.
78-110711749713 Mar 2005, 17:36 UTC
| Quote (shdrex @ Mar. 13 2005,8:17) |
| P.S. Here hunter here boy, come on down be scared i wont hurt you (at least not yet), what a cute little hunter take a cute little mithril sword in the face. |
Lol, yes, a mithril sword and some elvish arrows! Sic 'em, Lurtz!
Anyway, very good poem! I loved it. Kind of makes me think of the Outlaw Wolves... ever heard of Lobo, Blanca, Rags the Digger,... any of them?70-110747806814 Mar 2005, 22:32 UTC
Ya, very sad. But very evil too. and that's good. 
hehehe 87-110773702015 Mar 2005, 00:48 UTC
So is the angry wolf on a path of revenge or something? Anyways, nice song. I really like the way you set it up. Not bad!
Wolfen 82-111069430115 Mar 2005, 03:49 UTC
well, yes and no, the angry wolf is on a path of revenge, but he is also on a path for truth, he wishes to get revenge on the hunter that killed his family, but he is also wanting to know the truth of why the hunter killed his family etc...
115-110950221415 Mar 2005, 15:20 UTC
Well i can only say this about vengeance:
The path of vengeance is bittersweet,
The taste of death is bloody dangerous,
The life is valued at it's own value,
And sometimes the eye for a eye is not the answer.
There is only one diffrence between the revenger and the survivor
The revenger will never get what he had lost, and will sacrifice to gain a peace to the soul.
And the survivor will pass all the dangers in fronth of him and walk the path of virtue
Because the line between honor and rage
Is a narrow and dangerous one.
(its not poetry, no rime only some advices.)
Ok cya later!
82-111069430117 Mar 2005, 10:27 UTC
New poem (if i can call it that lol 
):
A wolf staring up at the Heavens
a wolf starving to death,
he is affraid of change.
He howls at the moon but gets no answer,
as if it's out of range.
The deer and the Carabu are gone, they are nowhere to be seen.
The wolf is starving and the others turn on each other for food.
The wolves have agreed that because of their young leader's greed,
they must elect a new leader, for their better good.
Their young leader does not agree, he starts to growl a warning growl, he starts to howl.
Some back away, but others keep on advancing,
Their leader is young, but in-experienced and does not have alot of strength.
The others overthrow him, and leave him for dead.
The wolves elect a new leader, without lust, without greed, without hate.
The wolves dismiss the images of their old leader from their minds and heads,
they dismiss the images before it's too late. 70-110747806817 Mar 2005, 22:47 UTC
hey cool Ripper and shdrex! both very good poems! 82-111069430117 Mar 2005, 23:30 UTC
cheers m8!
109-110769783820 Mar 2005, 13:26 UTC
cool ripper!!!!