112-106196083314 Oct 2003, 22:13 UTC
yup, new fanfic, as most of you know the procedure.
reviews please.
if you don't have time thats fine, it's up 2 u, enjoy.
Fan fic 76-106196064314 Oct 2003, 23:05 UTC
It looks good. Your story writing skills have gotten better since the last time I saw. Keep it up my friend.
112-106196083316 Oct 2003, 06:43 UTC
thanx lone, pitty no-one else has left a review,looks like my fic is no longer as popular as it used to be, oh well, if anyone does leave a review i would be greatful.
76-106196064316 Oct 2003, 20:59 UTC
I am sure others like it. They just probably dont have the time to drop off a message. Speaking about messages. I am leaving for awhile psychic. My old man is ill and we will be going to miame soon. So dont try to get in contact with me for awhile. Can you also tell that to my friend Snowy? I would apprieciat it. Unil we meet again.
69-106279399516 Oct 2003, 23:13 UTC
Out of curiosity, is this a sequel to another story? If it is which story would that be? I don't want to read this one without reading the whole series.
112-106196083317 Oct 2003, 07:05 UTC
ok man, this is the first one, First fanfic
enjoy 69-106279399521 Oct 2003, 02:00 UTC
Thanx! I'll get back to you after I finish them.
112-106196083321 Oct 2003, 08:21 UTC
thanx 
69-106279399522 Oct 2003, 01:44 UTC
Well I already finished both of them(I have too much time on my hands
). Overall they were very good. Sometimes it wasn't as detailed as it could have been(can't think of a specific example off the top of my head).
If you aren't going to finish it someone else had better because I want to hear the end of the story. 